First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello.
I am Karen from Chengdu China.
#1 I like watching English TV series very much.
# 2 Now I always watch The Secret Circle, Supernatural and The Vampire Dairies.
#3 I am also crazy about Adele, Lady Gaga and Nelly Furtado's music rather much.

Hi Karen.

It's Sandi from Hong Kong. Nice to meet you. I love watching English TV series too. Try Glee, the lying game and pretty little lairs. Their settings are in high sschool, you can know more about the US teens via those TV series. By the way, watching the secret circle is an excellent chioce.

#1 'I like something very much." is ok but you're talking about an action, like doing something. Therefore, using gerund is better.

#2 "Always" is used to modify the verb here as "watch". you are using simple prsent tense to describe a fact or a thing you do all the time. So, the word "now" is kind of extra. It's not a must to cross out "now" but i think the sentence is more concise after crossing it out.

#3 "crazy" is an adjective so you need a linking verb (e.g. is, am, are...) before an adjective. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello.
I am Karen from Chengdu China.
I like English TV series very much.
Now I always watch The Secret Circle, Supernatural and The Vampire Dairies.
I'm also crazy about Adele, Lady Gaga, and Nelly Furtado's music. rather much.

Nice to meet you! My name's Lianna. I'm going to China to study abroad next year. :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello.
I am Karen from Chengdu China.
I like watching Enlish TV series very much.
Now I always watch The Secret Circle, Supernatural and The Vampire Dairies.
I also crazy about Adele, Lady Gaga and Nelly Furtado's music rather much.