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the three days of QingMing Festeval the three days i had a great time,Eventhoug i couldn't come back to remember my ancestors .i think it doesn't matter.because all of them live in my heart.several chinese incluing me celebrate the ester day with american friends .it was my first time join in the day and knew jesus.they are very friendly.it' had been my fist time talk something in english to foreigners face to face.i was too nervious to complish a entire sentence.during the days,i did a part-time job in a five star hotel where provide the american embassiers lunch.that day we students are that tired but meanningful.i i enjoy the day very much!

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The last three days of QingMing Festeval Festival

The last three days I had a great time. Even though I couldn't come (go?) back to remember my ancestors. I think it doesn't matter. Because* all of them live in my heart. Several Chinese people incluing including me myself celebrated the ester Easter day with American friends。 It was my first time to join in the day and knew learn about Jesus. They are were very friendly. It had been my fist first time talking about something in English to with foreigners face to face. I was too nervious nervous to complish accomplish an entire sentence. During the days, I did a part-time job in a five star hotel where they provided me with (?) the an American embassiers embassies lunch. That day we (suggest 'all‘)the students are that were tired but meanningful (suggest 'fulfilled'). I enjoyed the day very much!

 

You need to use fullstops and capitals, maybe your keyboard settings hinder your writing.

*Try to avoid starting sentences with because.

 

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