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Whether women should be allowed to serve in the military has been a topic of discussion Nowadays. Army plays a important roles in modern society. In the meantime. Whether women should join the military has sparked much debate .some people assert that woman should allow to join the military. While many others argue that let women join the military is not good for military’s management. Personally am in favor of the former view. Convincing arguments can be made that woman status is more and more important in the world. To star with we shouldn’t discrimination the women join the military they have the same gender equality as man. a lot of woman become to a soldiers in the history, such as MULAN. she insisted on join the military even she is a women. she have right to choose what things she want to do . Moreover I think that women can use the computer and internet more effectively. they can help lot when the campaign is begin. Lastly lot of women became a military nurse or doctor. that is an important parts of Army. Admittedly. There are some negative effect. The reason for this is that women are difficult to training. Because they didn’t has a strong body. Allowing women to join the military brings a lots of certain risks .the increasing crime rate and some healthy problems. In summary, I would concede that women join the may brings a lot of problems. Despite that I am favor women should allow to join the military. Overall, I am convinced that it is in the best interests of a nation if women are granted equal rights in this area.

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