My Bad Colds

I got a cold a month ago, but it is still with me now. It's like what a bad boyfriend, just stay with hanging around me try its best and doing whatever he likes. I really hate it. No one knows how much I want to get rid of it. God help me. cross my heart....

I hope I didn't rewrite it too much. I made a guess at what you were trying to say, when you called the cold a "guy".

Cross my heart (and hope to die) is only used when you make a promise, or swearing that you are telling the truth.

Pay attention to capital letters, and put a space after each punctuation mark. This is important.

My bad colds

I got a cold a month ago.I'm not well yet.What a bad event.I  hate it.No one can undestand me about the illness.I hope to get rid of it.God help me.