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Yesterday , my classmates and I go out.For the weekend holiday of four days to buy the ticket to home.We together to eat lunch.Lunch looks very light, but very delicious.We also shopping for a lot of stores.My friends and I are very happy together.^_^
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Good day
Yesterday, my classmates and I go went out. For the weekend holiday of four days, to buy the ticket we bought tickets to travel home. We ate lunch together to eat lunch. Our lunch looks very light, but very delicious. We also went shopping for through a lot of stores. My friends and I are very happy together.^_^
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Nice pic i love it
I try to correct some words :$
Yesterday , my classmates and I went to out For the weekend holiday of four days to buy the ticket to home We together to eat lunch. Lunch looks very light, but very delicious. We also shopping for a lot of stores. My friends and I were very happy together.^_^
when You talk about something happened in the past
you have to use all in the past, I think that :)
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