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Composition:Renewing Knowledge The New knowledge is very important for everyone.We learn our world by study the new knowledge.When we were very young ,we curious about everything arround us,but via the time pass,we grow up.We know which we should do,which we can't. We can renew our knowledge from the variety of book.Reading the history book can expand our view and relize some questions better.The literature can improve my reading level.Renew the knowledge need not only reading books but also practice.Only by practice can we know which answer is right. In my opinion,renew knowledge is very necessary for everyone.With the technology developing,more and more new imformations appeared.If we only use the out-date knowledge,we must make a terrible problem.

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Composition:_Renewing Knowledge

 

The New knowledge is very important for everyone._We learn our world by studying the new knowledge._When we were very young,_we were curious about everything arround us,_but via the as time passes by,_we grow up._We know which things we should do,_and which things we can't (better with: should not do).

We can renew our knowledge from the variety of books._Reading the history books can expand our view and realize some questions better,_while the literature can improve my our reading level._Renewing the knowledge needs not only to reading books but also to practice._Only by continuous practice can we know which answer is right.

In my opinion,_renewing knowledge is very necessary for everyone._With the technology developing,_more and more new informations appears._If we only used the out-dated knowledge,_we must could come up with some difficulty make a terrible problem.

 

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Please leave a space after each punctuation mark (except after an open quotation mark or bracket, and after closed quotation mark or bracket if followed by another punctuation mark).

 

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Good day. / 祝 是日安好。

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