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Composition:_Renewing Knowledge
The New knowledge is very important for everyone._We learn our world by studying the new knowledge._When we were very young,_we were curious about everything arround us,_but via the as time passes by,_we grow up._We know which things we should do,_and which things we can't (better with: should not do).
We can renew our knowledge from the variety of books._Reading the history books can expand our view and realize some questions better,_while the literature can improve my our reading level._Renewing the knowledge needs not only to reading books but also to practice._Only by continuous practice can we know which answer is right.
In my opinion,_renewing knowledge is very necessary for everyone._With the technology developing,_more and more new informations appears._If we only used the out-dated knowledge,_we must could come up with some difficulty make a terrible problem.
N.B.
Please leave a space after each punctuation mark (except after an open quotation mark or bracket, and after closed quotation mark or bracket if followed by another punctuation mark).
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Good day. / 祝 是日安好。
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