Me and the world the World and I(In English, you should always say "something and I" instead of "I and anything". In a title, words should always be in its capital form except such words as "the", "and", "or", "a" and so on)

Amm(what does amm mean? In an essay, never use "hmm", "amm" or "well" to express that you are thinking about something) hello(It'd be better to put a comma here) every one,(Replace comman by a full stop here.) I want to be more than good in English I want to improve my English.(I know you want to say, "I want to make my English more than good". That expression however is not decent.) so (No logical relationship between to sentences, so do not use a "so". Only use a "so", when it is really required. Reading wisely and you'll gradually learn how to use "so" correctly.)any help will be useful. To sum up  (Ditto. Peter helps his neighbour a lot. He also donades boold. Yesterday, he helped a friend from China to improve his Arabic. To sum up, Peter is really a good guy.)I will try as hard as match much as I can.

Me and the world

Amm hello everyone, I want to be better in English, so any help will be useful. All in all I will try hard as much as I can.

My English is also not very good, so let's help each other~