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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello! everyone! Let me introduce myself to you. I'm Masanori Kudo. Kudo is my family name and Masanori is my given name. Please call me mahsa. I'm living in the town where snow falls with my wife. I am a local government worker aged forty. I like trekking and walking in the forest...Et cetera... Anyway, I want to be good at English! Because I wanted to be friends with people around the world. But, my English level is lowest.(´∵｀) I need your help because I'm out of my depth here. I look forward to your visit! (If you are friendly, please corrected my self introduction) mahsa

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! everyone! Let me introduce myself to you. I'm Masanori Kudo.
Kudo is my family name and Masanori is my given name. Please call me mahsa. I'm living in the town where snow falls with my wife. I am a local government worker aged forty. I like trekking and walking in the forest...Et cetera...
Anyway, I want to be good at English! Because I would like to be friends with people around the world. But, my English level is lowest.(´∵｀) I need your help because I'm out of my depth here.
I look forward to your visit!

(If you are friendly, please correct my self introduction)
mahsa

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! everyone! Let me introduce myself to you. I'm Masanori Kudo.
Kudo is my family name and Masanori is my given name. Please call me mahsa. I'm living in the town where snow falls with my wife. I am a local government worker aged forty. I like trekking and walking in the forest...Et cetera...
Anyway, I would like to be good at English! Because I want to be friends with people around the world. But, my English level is lowest.(´∵｀) I need your help because I'm out of my depth here.
I look forward to your visit!

(If you are friendly, please corrected my self introduction)
mahsa

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Excellent work :) nothing further to add.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! Let me introduce myself. I'm Masanori Kudo.
Kudo is my family name and Masanori is my given name. Please call me mahsa. I'm living with my wife in the town where snow falls. I am forty years old, local government worker. I like trekking and walking in the forest...etc...
Anyway, I want to be good at English because I make friends with people all around the world. Unfortunately, my English level is low.(´∵｀) I need your help because I'm beyone my depth here. (I AM NOT SURE ABOUT THIS PART)
I look forward to your visit!

(Would you be kind enough to correct my self introduction, please)
mahsa

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Hello Masha-san,

I have made a few corrections for you and would be delighted to chat and help you with English language practice :-).

 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! Let me introduce myself to you. I'm Masanori Kudo.
Kudo is my family name and Masanori is my given name. Please call me mahsa. I'm living in the town where snow falls with my wife. I am a local government worker aged forty. I like trekking and walking in the forest...Etc...
Anyway, I want  would like to be good at English because I wanted would like to be friends with people around the world. However my English level is low.(´∵｀) I need your help because I'm out of my depth here.
I look forward to your visit!

(If you are friendly, please corrected my self introduction)
Mahsa

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