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A little story by me. I did this as homework... ________________________________________________________________ I arrived to my friend's house and that afternoon I told her the reason of my feeling. Me: He deception me... yesterday he tried to hit me. Elena: That's terrible you mustn't return to this house!! ok? Me: I know but... Elena: No! But no!!! Dear... you are in danger with him. Me: Ok. just hug me please. One day after when i was walking... I saw a sympathetic clown. Curious isn´t it? a clown in a cloudy day. I was sad and he realized it or so I think ´cause when I passed in front of him, He gave me a rose like a present without tell me nothing. I did not smile...really I felt bad. Several days passed and I didn´t hear nothing about him, it was strange ´cause I was sure that he knew the adress of my best friend... Anyway I decided to forget him, but something inside of me told me that he was near and waiting for me. This morning I woke up... in the mirror i saw a message: "please look into your bag, I guess my cellphone is there" I found it strange ´cause i haven´t used my bag for several days but i did it. I didn´t find her cellphone althought... I found the flower thae the clown gave me ... it was dry, sadness invaded me. I smelled the flower... and that´s the last that I can remember. Now, just at this moment I´m scared ´cause i don´t know where I am... I can see nothing, i´m blind... just I´m speaking alone and I already know why the clown´s sight reminded me to someone. The end.

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A little story by me.

I did this as homework...

________________________________________________________________

I arrived to my friend's house and that afternoon I told her the reason of my feeling.

Me: He cheated on me... yesterday he tried to hit me.
Elena: That's terrible you mustn't return to this house!! ok?
Me: I know but...
Elena: No! But no!!! Dear... you are in danger with him.
Me: Ok. just hug me please.

One day after when i was walking... I saw a sympathetic clown. Curious isn´t it? a clown in a cloudy day.
I was sad and he realized it or so I think ´cause when I passed in front of him, He gave me a rose like a present without telling me anything . I did not smile...really I felt bad.

Several days passed and I didn´t hear nothing about him, it was strange ´cause I was sure that he knew the adress of my best friend... Anyway I decided to forget him, but something inside of me told me that he was near and waiting for me.

This morning I woke up... in the mirror i saw a message: "please look  into your bag, I guess my cellphone is there" I found it strange ´cause i haven´t used my bag for several days but i did it. I didn´t find her cellphone although... I found the flower which  the clown gave me ... it was dry, sadness invaded me. I smelled the flower... and that´s the last thing, I can remember.

Now, just at this moment I´m scared ´cause i don´t know where I am... I can see nothing, i´m blind... just I´m speaking alone and I already know why the clown´s sight reminded me to someone.

The end.

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