My Family
here are 4 members in my family, actually I have a eldder sister. My
father is a pilot. He often goes out on business. My mother is a
professional worker but she teachs me a lot of things, for instance,
carefulness and earnest. It is useful for me to study in school.During
my prepare for the postgraduate exam, my families’ love and support
have always been my power and I hope I will be able to repay them in
the future. That’s all, Thank you.
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My Family
There are four members in my family; actually I have an elder sister. My father is a pilot. He often goes out on business. My mother is works professionally worker but she teaches me a lot of things, such as carefulness and earnest. It is useful for me to study in school. During my preparation for the postgraduate exam, my family's love and support have always been my power and I hope I will be able to repay them in the future. That’s all, Thank you.
Well done. :)
In proper writing, numerals are spelled out as words.
"A professional worker" sounds a bit unwieldy, as well as vague. Professional in which field/industry?
" Familes' " means there are several familes.
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yup you are a lucky bird that have all good things in life,say thanks to god :-))))
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Our parents are teaching us many values. Aren`t they God`s gift?
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