First notebook entry: Introducing myself
To whom it may concern.My full name is Thi Tra My Quach.You can call me Nikki if you want. I got 6.5 IELTS score 2 years ago. From this time,i didn't speak English anymore. Now I am learning MBA Hospitality but my interaction in speaking English is not quick. I join Itaki with the hope that I can practise English with native speakers who want to learn Vietnamese. I can help them speaking Vietnamese.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
To the people this may concern: my name is My-Quach, but you can call me Nikki if you like. I got a score of 6.5 in IELTS about 2 years ago. After this, I didn't practice any English. Now I'm doing an MBA in Hospitality, but my English fluency is not quick enough. I've joined Itaki in hope of practicing English with native speakers who wish to learn Vietnamese. I can help with spoken Vietnamese (in exchange for fluent English).
1. Formal or informal writing? I'm correcting for informal writing.
2. Exclude your middle names, unless it's like Sue-Anne.
3. Notice MBA gets 'an' because of the 'em' letter sound at it's start.
4. Perhaps, never suggest speaking your Vietnamese name from writing. A reader may never know the, spoken or written, difference described by proper use in a very strict tonal language.
5. Switch to 'practicing' not 'practising' for the UK.
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Thank u very much!
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PS: I am using a tablet, so I can't use the correction function right now.
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Some suggestions....
I achieved a 6.5 IELTS score 2 years ago, but I haven't practiced English since then. Now I am studying for an MBA in hospitality, but my interactions are slow when speaking English. I joined italki with the hope that I can practise English with native speakers who want to learn Vietnamese.
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