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My favorate movie I want to talk about the film PIRATES OF CARIBEEN. Though they were producted several years ago,I didn't watch them until these days. I am absorbed by the story. Maby that's the attraction of freedom which I have been looking for. I really hope that one day I can travel all over the world. And now I'm planning my first trip after graduated.

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My favorate movie

-My favorite movie

 

I want to talk about the film PIRATES OF CARIBEEN.

- I want to talk about the film entitled Pirates of Caribbean.

 

Though they were producted several years ago. I didn't watch them until these days.

- Although it was produced several years ago, I didn't watch it until now.

 

I am absorbed by the story.

 

Maby that's the attraction of freedom which I have been looking for.

-Maybe that's the attraction of freedom, which I have been looking for.

 

I really hope that one day I can travel all over the world. And now I'm planning my first trip after graduated.

- And now I'm planning my first trip after graduation.

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