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Today Today is very busy day. I got so many things to do in office. Like always i went to home with transjakarta bus. So many people, bad traffic jam, everyone wants to go home fast. I waited transjakarta bus like other people, so long waiting, because of bad traffic jam, i think traffic jam is unsolved problem in Jakarta. After 30 minutes waiting, transjakarta bus came, and everyone wanted to enter bus first, and get the seat in bus first, and finally i am one of the lucky person who got seat in bus, rest were standing. When i looked around at the standing people, there was pregnant woman standing in transjakarta bus, i looked at guys who got seat, no one from them who tried to offer seat to that pregnant woman. Some guys pretend that they didn't know that, others were pretending sleepy. I know that all people are tired at that time, but can't they see the sticker in bus that told Old people, pregnant women, and women with kids are priority??? So, i called that pregnant woman and offer my seat to her. She looks so tired, after working and in pregnant condition. After seeing that, i remember my mom, i miss my mom :(."Mom, how are you today?". For Indonesian people, if we want to be better, at first we have to change OUR ATTITUDE

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Today is a very busy day. I've got so many things to do in the office. Like always, I went to home with the transjakarta bus. There are so many people, bad the traffic jam is bad, and everyone wants to go home fast. I waited for the transjakarta bus just like the other people, so long I was waiting for so long because of the bad traffic jam. I think traffic jam is an unsolved problem in Jakarta. After 30 minutes waiting, the transjakarta bus finally came, and everyone wanted to enter the bus first, and get the a seat in on the bus first., and Finally I am one of the lucky person people who got a seat in on the bus, the rest were was standing.

When I looked around at the standing people, there was a pregnant woman standing in on the transjakarta bus. I looked at the guys who got seats, and no one from none of them who tried to offer tried offering their seat to that pregnant woman. Some guys pretended that they didn't know that see her, others were pretending to be sleepy. I know that all of the people are tired at that time, but can't they see the sticker in bus that told say old people, pregnant women, and women with kids are priority???

So, I called that pregnant woman and offered my seat to her. She lookeds so tired, after working and in pregnant condition. After seeing that, I remembered my mom, and how I miss my mom :(."Mom, how are you today?". For Indonesian people, if we want to be better, at first we have to change OUR ATTITUDE.


:) One advice, whenever you use a noun remember to add an appropriate article, either "a," "an," or "the." Here's a website that describes well the difference between definite and indefinite articles:

http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/adjectives-determiners-the-a-an.htm

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