Just Do It
I have gotten over 1 hour bus to attend an interview and the result is wait for the the second interview. But it doesn't matter for me,I have audaciously stepped my first step to ask the comment for the interviewer and reaped a valuable advice. I haven't done this in my past interview.
I thought it was a stupid, naive and childish behavior. After I have done that, I just think I was a shy little girl. I will remember the precious remark to avoid from committing the same mistake.
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Good effort...second revision is a lot better :-)
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Just Do It
I had to travel by bus for over an hour to attend an interview and the result was to wait for a second interview,but it doesn't matter to me.I have audaciously stepped my first step to ask the interviewer for feedback and reaped a valuable advice. I haven't done this in my past interview/s.
I thought I was stupid, naive and childish in my behavior. After I asked the interveiwer for advice, from his comments, I just think I was a shy little girl. I will remember the precious remark to avoid from committing the same mistake.
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revised version:
I have got over 1 hour bus to attend an interview and the result is wait for the the second interview. But it doesn't matter for me,I have audaciously stepped my first step to ask the comment form the interviewer and have reaped a valuable advice. I haven't done this in my past interviews.
I thought it was a stupid, naive and childish behavior. After I have done that, I just think I was a incompetently shy girl. I will remember the precious remark to avoid from committing the same mistake.
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