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hustle and bustle life It's hustle and bustle these days, I din't even get time to write english entry. Too many break in burn out my enegy, I felt exhausted all day long. I don't like this kind of working environment. No plan, no order, bureaucratic, all things went like idiot. In my option, the ideal company should care it's employees, give them space to create, time to grow up, task full of competitive and then reward for their employees' good performance. Of course, the company wherein I worked is not an ideal one. But I can't quit it and find a new one because I had been jumped one time per year for some reasons beyond myself. Some guy will label me unstability if I jumped again this time. unstability label does no good to me and my career. I need to work here for another one year or so. During working, I should do the ITLS test, prepare some good, cardinal staffs for my next job.

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the hustle and bustle of life

 

I've been caught in the hustle and bustle of life these days, .  I din't don't even get have time to write an english entry.

Too many break in burn out my enegy, I felt exhausted all day long.

I don't like this kind of working environment. No plan, no order, bureaucratic, all things went like idiot.

In my option opinion, the ideal company should care for it's employees, give them space to create, time to grow up, create tasks full of competitive competition and then reward for their employees' good performance.

Of course, the company wherein I worked is not an ideal one. But I can't quit it and or find a new one because I had been jumped moved one time per this year already for some reasons beyond myself me. Some guy will label me unstableility if I jumped again this time. unstability label does no good to me and my career.

I need to work here for another one year or so. During While working, I should do the ITLS test, prepare some good, cardinal staffs for my next job.

 

This seems like alot of corrections, but your English is actually very good!  Some problems were just word choice and tense, both easily fixed as you practice more.  I did not understand the "tasks full of competition" part and the "cardinal staffs."   Nice entry!

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Your english is better than mine.

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