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Small Composition ----online games With the development of economy and increase in the living standard, more and more people enjoy a fairly comfortable life.almost every Chinese family has at least one PC/laptop. Yeah, the PC/laptop bring us a lot of convenience .but there was the big question that young children may be addicted to it.especially for online games. The number of youths are caught up in the online games is bigger and bigger.so lots of parents and schools are worrying about that.there still some people who don’t think the online games is good for nothing. In my opinion, play online games may be good if you play it in your rest time and not tendency to turn to it. You should be in a good mood after play the game.so why not? You won’t have enough vigour to work or study If you pay too much attention to it So , put all this together, we could play online games but not much addicted to it.

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With the development of our economy and the increasingly better living standards, more and more people start to enjoy a fairly comfortable life. Almost every Chinese family has at least one computer (which is debatable to say). Yeah, computer brings us a lot of conveniences. With a computer we can check e-mails, book flights, look for jobs and access to news and information barely reachable before... Yet despite all the advantages we're experiencing, there is underlying a the troublesome issue, that young people tend to be as well 'easily' addicted to it, especially for online games.

The number of younsters caught up in the online games is more considerable than ever. Lots of parents and school authorities are worrying about the mental health of their young people.

 

There are still people who don’t think the online games are good for nothing. In my opinion, playing online games may be good if you play it in your spare time and do not let the games dertermine whether you should keep playing or quit for the sake of your parents and teachers' expectations and your self benefits.

 

If you like online games, you are supposed to be in a good mood after playing them. So why not? You won’t have enough vigour to work or study if you constantly get bored of what you reguarly have to do.

So , put all this together, we can play online games but should not be much addicted to them.

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PC = personal computer. desktop, laptop, tablet all them are PC as long as they are for personal usage.

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