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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, I'm Aiace.
I Live near Rome, in Italy.
I'm improving my English and I would like TO practice (it- COULD BE LEFT OUT) with other people.
I'm 30 years old and I'm fond for OF English/American music and Italian music.
If you want I can translate to FOR you some Italian songS, you will be amazed.
Bye for now and.... See you soon!
I'm improving my English - THIS IS CORRECT, 'trying to improve' IS ALSO CORRECT
If you want I can translate some Italian songS to FOR you - PROBABLY BETTER
First notebook entry: Introducing myself.
Hi, I am Aiace and I am thirty years of age. I live near Rome, in Italy.
I am trying to improve my English and would like to practise with other people.
I am fond of English, American and Italian music.
If you like, I can translate some Italian songs for you. You would be amazed.
Bye for now and see you soon!
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, I'm Aiace.
I Live near Rome, in Italy.
I'm improving my English and I would like to practice with other people.
I'm 30 years old and I'm fond of English, American and Italian music.
If you want I can translate for you some Italian songs, you will be amazed.
Bye for now and.... See you soon!
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