c Choose to do good or not (first letter of title should be capitalized)

This morning,i I was sitting in the shutter bus and suddently saw an old man knee down on down on his knees in the street. His wife lay down beside of him. b Both of them got had grey hair and wear wore old fashioned time jackets. t They looked like a typical old couple s from the countryside. My heart just got hurt s when i  I see saw them, B because there are some smiliar the expression on their face reminded of me of my grandma who had just passed away last month.
   I choosed chose to take get off from the bus and walk ed to them. At this time, they got had some problems with the police because policeman said they they were influenced affecting the traffic . and so they had better move their place. I gave the couple 10 yuan and then aslo told them  , that they should not stay there . B that it would be better to be in a more safer place. Then the police told the old man "i I understand your situation but you see the good hearted girl who gave you money aslo (this word is 'also', 'l' before 's') also told you to move the place". t The old guy said "y Yesterday there are was a guy who gave me 700yuan." idont know what the old guy means to say this I did not understand what he meant. Maybe  i  I just had not given him too less enough money. a At this time, another guy on the street told me "do u  Do you know they are cheaters?" i I said, "It doesnt matter, they are old." Then he said,"y Yes,but they are not sick. y Yesterday they got so many much money ,  because a guy gave him 700 rmb and another one gave them 500 rmb." i I didnt want to hear anymore and so I just left.
   I actually feel very good about my decision, no matter whether they are cheaters or not. , a At least there are some people in the world who cares  about others and are willing to help those people who is are homeless and hopeless. Dont let your doubeness doubt to stop your heart of from helping others. We take have the responsiblity to take of care our own heart, to keep it good by doing good , And its  It is their own responsibility to take care their own heart , and decide whether to cheat or not.

xiaxion,

This is very good! I think it would be okay for you to push your humility aside for a minute and be joyful about your essay! =o)

 Now I wish to make some suggestions, just somethings to keep in mind when writing in English:

1. Always put a space after a punctuation mark (. , ' " )

2. Indent new paragraphs by pushing the first sentence to the right either by using the 'Tab' button or 'Spacebar' (5 times for the spacebar)

3. The first letter of the first word of a new sentence should be capitalized (upper case  ( this: C  not this: c )

4. Alway capitalize 'I'  (this: I  not this: i ) when refering to yourself in 1st person

Lovely job! Keep up your good work (and your good heart)!