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For my next week exam Hi everyone. I need your help. I'll have English exam on Tuesday and I'd prepared topic about my scientific work. If it is not very hard for you, please, check this text. Let me introduce myself. I’m Nina Davydovskaya, the sixth course student of the Faculty of informatics and robotics. The subject of my work is the decision support system of connection complex diagnostic process. This project directs on developing program product meaning the system, that supports decision-making activities and helps to make decisions, which may be rapidly changing and not easily specified in advance. During the exploitation the connection network is exposed to influence of the environment, that’s why the diagnostics process is very important. The diagnostics system must reveal and eliminate the faulty network equipment. In this point of view, the best way is to use the decision support system. My scientific advisor is the senior lecturer Fedorova Natalya Ivanovna. She is the co-author of my article “The developing of multiplexer diagnostic module”, published in the collection of the fourth all-Russia youth scientific Mavlutov conference. I also took part in the fifth scientific Mavlutov conference having written the article “The approach to decision support in connection complex diagnostic process”. In addition, I’ve got registration certificate of my diagnostic program. At the end I want to say a few words about the novelty of my scientific work. The human making decision is not organized properly at this moment, and the information for network operation analysis is not systemized. This program product will significantly accelerate making decision process and will provide making decision specialist by necessary information in time. That’ll provide the necessary network equipment control and will allow immediately react on the appearance of errors. Thank you for your attention.

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It's too long to correct here. It's good and probably good enough to present as it is now but there are some vocabulary issues and you're making some mistakes with the verb tenses. It would be best to talk about it because italki limits my answers. My Skype: brian.madden4

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