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A bit of my Curriculum Vitae Hello! Please, correct me if I have mistakes!!! Here I go: profession: Designer, with Master's degree in Industrial Design & Product Development likes: - Design - Sports - Illustration & Comic - Photography languages: - Spanish (native language) - English (written and spoken) Constant practice with foreigners. Works: -(2011) XXXX company Web & Graphic designer. Brochures and posters development, website interfaces, presentations. -(2011) XXXX Event Advertising design. -(2010) XXXX company Comic magazines named “El Tallerín”. Magazine's editor and one of illustrators team. - (2009) XXXX University Tools designed to improve the Apple harvest productivity. Thesis for the degree of Designer. - (2008) XXXX University “Neo-Bathroom” modular system design. Master thesis for the degree of "Master in Industrial Design & Product Development".

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A bit of my Curriculum Vitae

Hello! Please, correct me if I have mistakes!!! Here I go:

profession:
Designer, with Master degree in Industrial Design & Product Development

likes:
- Design
- Sports
- Illustration & Comics
- Photography

languages:
- Spanish (native language)
- English (written and spoken, constant practice with foreigners)

Works:
-(2011) XXXX company
Web & Graphic designer. Development of brochures and posters, website interfaces, presentations.

-(2011) XXXX Event
Advertising design.

-(2010) XXXX company
Comic magazine named “El Tallerín”.
Editor of the magazine  and a member of the illustrative team.

- (2009) XXXX University
Tools designed to improve productivity of harvesting apples.
Designer Degree (are you an engineer?)

- (2008) XXXX University
“Neo-Bathroom” modular system design.
"Master in Industrial Design & Product Development" Degree.

 

 

To my understanding, Sebastian, a designer is someone who works with computers or with magazine&newspaper layouts, advertising as well, but you are talking about industries here, is it sort of engineering?

Well, any way, to your information the signs "!!!!" is a statement of demands. Mind your manners next time!!!

All the best with the job search.

 

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Hello, My name is maris, which is really nice to get on this site, I took interest in you after reading your profile at (www.italki.com). ([email protected]) I believe age and distance has nothing to do with love, so just drop me an email through my private e-mail address ([email protected]), so that we can communicate better and I send you my images. Thank you. maris.
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Katya! I know about that. It is just an example!!!! I just want to know if it's correctly written!!
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Sebastian, as far as I can see, your resume is just an enumeration of facts, but where I can see a person behind these facts! To write a correct CV is a difficult job, despite all the prejudice if you do make a mistake, it is not a crucial disappointment, better read some books about the art of structuring resumes. Good luck. ;)

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