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Is outside beauty everything There is no doubt that everyone loves something beautiful.Nowadays,many girls will have a cosmetic surgery to look more attrative.They spend a lot of time dressing up.It is true that they look more beautiful in this way.There is a proverd saying,"Don't judge a book by its cover."However,in real life,people with beautiful face will attract others easily.It reminded me of my geography teacher in high school.We asked her why she didn't stay in big cities to have a better development.She said that she had taken an examination in a big city and got a high score.But she was not accepted just because she 's not beautiful enough. I have doubted if a good-looking face was everything since then.I never deny the fact that outside beauty is significant.However, inner beauty is more important.As a girl,we need to diversify our experience and broaden our view sight.When time goes by, your outer beauty will fade away but your wisdom will be with you for good. The physical apperance makes a good impression on others while the inner beauty will be remembered forever.

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Beauty of mind is much more important than appearance beauty
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Great post!
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Is outside outward beauty everything?


There is no doubt that everyone loves something beautiful. Nowadays, many girls will have a cosmetic surgery to look more attractive. They spend a lot of time dressing up. It is true that they look more beautiful in this way. There is a proverd saying, "Don't judge a book by its cover". However, in real life, people with a beautiful face will attract others easily.

 

It reminded me of my geography teacher in high school. We asked her why she didn't stay in a big city big cities to have a better career development. She said that she had taken an examination in a big city and got a high score but she was not accepted just because she was not beautiful enough. I have doubted if that a good-looking face was is everything since then.

 

I never deny the fact that outside outward beauty is significant. However, inner beauty is more important. As girls, we need to diversify our experience and broaden our view on life. When time goes by, your outer beauty will fade away but your wisdom will be with you for good. The Physical appearances makes a good impression on others while the inner beauty is will be remembered forever.

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^_^ I totally agree with you. But I don't believe that self-perspective is the issue. Unfortunately, it is a man's world right now. Men hold most positions of power everywhere and men are visual creatures. Sometimes it is the subconscious that is in play. I do believe there will be a revolution in the future, hopefully it happens before we ruin everything. Great entry!

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