self-introduction
You can call me Charlie. There are 3 people in my family. My parents and i .My mother is an accountant in a real estate company. My father works for an automobile manufacturer. i am the only boy in my family, so my parents expect much of me. In order not to let them down , i must be serious about everything.
In my free time , I enjoy raising pets, i would spend much time even the whole day on watching them, Sometimes i really feel fantastic why i can do that.Besides that, Tenis is my favourite sport. I like Roger Federal best among the active players for his perfect skills and attitude.
I also like listening music, nowadays, Adele who got the awards in The Grammy Award attracts me a lot for her sound. Her voice really sounds good.
Any mistakes ,pls correct it~ thx~
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self-introduction
You can call me Charlie. There are 3 people in my family: My two parents and I. My mother is an accountant for a real estate company. My father works for an automobile manufacturer. I am the only boy in my family, so my parents expect a lot of me. In order to not let them down, I must be serious about everything.
In my free time, I enjoy looking after pets. I could spend a lot of time, even the whole day, on watching them. Sometimes I really feel fantastic that I can do that. Besides that, tennis is my favourite sport. I like Roger Federer best among the active players for his perfect skills and attitude.
I also like listening to music. Nowadays, Adele who got the awards during The Grammy Awards attracts me a lot because of her sound. Her voice really sounds good.
Any mistakes, pls correct them~ thx~
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"Rumour has it" is my favourite right now :)
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I like <Rolling in the deep> and <Someone like you> the best~ how about you ?
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Hey Charlie, I really like Adele too.
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