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short story introduce myself my name anhar i come from the bigest country island., my background education is energy conersion engineering,. i interested to renewable energy. renewable energy is clean produce less polution. it's balances to our nature., we can't saving to use energy. energy requairement day by day almost increase,. we can't always dependent to crude oil. we know crude oil is finite energy resource. the solution is renewable energy. i really respect and appreciate if there are someone also interest to this field then make conversation with me about this. i wanna have ability in english to share anything with another people in this world. we must know not there lucky moment in this world. except, when we make conversation each other. we talking about something which is have good subject and then we can get something knowladge or idea from the conversation. actually now days my weakness in english is oral.sometime i get stuck when i still talking something. it's cause maybe i still learning. i hope there are a lot of people in this world help me by make conversation., i belief we can share anything which is advantage for us. actually i'm also interested to learn another language such as : arabic, deuct, swensk, and turk. i really open relation with all kind people in this world. please add my skype account : sun.rise_ganesha hope meet u soon best regard Anhar Karisman

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short story to introduce myself

my name is anhar and i come from the bigest country's biggest island., [??]
my background education is in energy conersion conservation/conversion [?] engineering,.
i interested to in renewable energy.
renewable energy is clean and produces less pollution. it's balances to our Using it takes into account balance with nature.,
we can't rely on saving to use energy savings/economizing. energy requairement requirements increase almost day by day almost increase,. we can't always dependent to on crude oil. we know crude oil is a finite energy resource.
the solution is renewable energy.
i really respect and appreciate if there are is someone also interested in to this field then make and who is interested in having conversations with me about this.

i wanna want to have ability in english to share anything i can think of with another people in this world. we must know not there We must appreciate the [that there will not always be]* lucky moments in this world. except, when we make conversation converse with each other. we will be talking about something which is have a good subject and then we can get something will be able to increase our knowledge knowladge or get new ideas from the conversation.

actually, nowadays my weakness is mainlyin spoken english is oral. sometimes i get stuck when i still talking am in the middle of saying something. it's cause maybe it's because i am still learning. i hope there are a lot of people in this world who can help me by make through conversation., i belief believe we can share anything, which is an advantage for us. [or: I believe we can share anythin which is advantageous for us..  2 different meanings]

actually i'm also interested to in learning another language such as : arabic, deuct dutch, swensk swedish, and turkish.

i really hope to open relations with all kind people in this world.
please add my skype account :

sun.rise_ganesha

hope meet u soon

best regard
Anhar Karisman

 

* I'm not sure what you meant here, your original sentence was not in the correct order. It could be either positive or negative so I put the second option in brackets.

Not too bad overall! You need to work a bit on which helper words go where, and a bit about spelling and word order, as well as learning the difference between spoken english and the way it's written (wanna= want to, etc).

By the way, my brother is a chemical engineer and Green party activist who believes in working in clean energy, I think you have the right idea :)

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