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I can Today,i am in bad mood,because two of my friends will leave my city to other city.now,i am not a studest,i must adapt to this social fast.But, i feel tired and difficult.my work, my life, my everything look like unsmooth.so ,i just want to find myself who always full of comfident and enthusiasm.ok,believe myself,i think i can so i can.good luck for myself.

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Today,i am in bad mood,because two of my friends will leave my city to other city.now,i am not a studest,i must adapt to this social fast.But, i feel tired and difficult.my work, my life, my everything look like unsmooth.so ,i just want to find myself who always full of comfident and enthusiasm.ok,believe myself,i think i can so i can.good luck for myself.


I (capital letter for 1st person) am in a bad mood.

 

will leave my city for another city/ will move to another city.

 

Now (capital letter at beginning of sentence)

 

now,i am not a studest,i must adapt to this social fast. 

Now, I am not a student, I must adapt to this life fast/ to this social life fast.

 

my work, my life, my everything look like unsmooth

My work, my life, everything looks rough/hard/difficult/tough (looks is singular, because my work+my life = plural, but are included in "everything" whic is singular) (no need of looks like as "rough" is an adjective. we use looks like to compare, mostly ex: he looks like my father, it looks like it is going to rain) - unsmooth is not correct


so ,i just want to find myself who always full of comfident and enthusiasm.

So, I just want to find myself always full of confidence and enthusiasm.

 

ok,believe myself,i think i can so i can.good luck for myself.

OK, I believe in myself. I think I can, so, I can. Good luck to myself

 

Good work!!

I wish you good luck. You are right, life is not easy!

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