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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi! Glad to have a chance to introduce myself here. My name is Guo Jiachen. You can call me Eric. I come from a beautiful city in the southest of China----Changzhou. Transport here is very convient, you can go anywhere by bus or BRT and it costs a little, which I'm quite proud of. I have a lot of hobbies and dreams. I enjoy playing basketball and games with my bosom friends, in my opinion, that's one of the most comfortable things in the world. I want to become an automobile engineer when finishing my college life. I dream to design many kinds of new vehicles and astonish all people around me! I want to have my showpieces in my job and my life,which I have consisted since I was young. Besides, I aim to go abroad to U.S or Germany for further study about my major. I think it will work a lot to realize my idea above. Apart from my future work, I have got some sort of ideas about travel. The first place I want to go is Norway, to the northest part of the world I can reach. Why? Because I'm crazy about the aurora! I used to see it from a documentary and from then, I kept thinking about it day and night. It's so gorgeous! Especially when you catch it in the polar place. Even thinking of this, I can't help imagining how fabulous it is! Though it's very cold there and hard for living, it is worthy taking a look. I also want to go to many other places to communicate with all kinds of people from different nations. When we listen to others' story, we always feel the same though we might never experience. And a face to face, heart to heart talk is cozy and pleasant. That's a cup of excellent tea of life! So, that's something about myself, if you're interested in me or my hometown or something about China, it will be welcomed to message or email me always~ Thank you for reading to know more about me~ :)

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First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

Hi! I am glad to have a chance to introduce myself here. My name is Guo Jiachen. You can call me Eric. I come from a beautiful city in the southeast of China -- Changzhou. Transportation here is very convenient; you can go anywhere by bus or BRT, and it costs a little, which I'm quite proud of.
I have a lot of hobbies and dreams. I enjoy playing basketball and games with my bosom friends. In my opinion, that's one of the most comfortable things in the world. I want to become an automobile engineer when after finishing my college life. I dream to of designing many kinds of new vehicles and astonishing all people everyone around me! I want to have my showpieces in from my job and my life, which that I have consisted accumulated since I was young.
Besides, I aim to go abroad to the U.S or Germany for further study about my major. I think it will would work help a lot to realize in realizing my idea above. Apart from my future work, I have got some sort of ideas about travel. The first place I want to go is Norway, to the northest most northern part of the world I can reach. Why? It is because I'm crazy about the aurora! I used to see saw it from in a documentary, and from then on, I kept thinking about it day and night. It's so gorgeous, especially when you catch it in the polar places! Even thinking of this, I can't help imagining how fabulous it is! Though it's very cold hard to live there and hard for living, it is worthy worth taking a look. I also want to go to many other places to communicate with all kinds of people from different nations. When we listen to others' story the stories of others, we always feel the same emotions, though we might never experience them ourselves. And a face-to-face, heart-to-heart talk is cozy and pleasant. That's a cup of excellent tea of life!
So, that's something about myself. If you're interested in me, or my hometown, or something about China, it your message or email will would be welcomed to message or email by me always.~
Thank you for reading to know more about me.~ :)

 

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