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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone. It's the first time for me to log in onto this netpage. (or website)
(or--"it's my first time logging onto this website")
Firstly, I'd like to make a simple instroduction of myself. I hope you can have a little understanding of me through this way (or from doing this).
I'm a lady who is not too young and alao also not too old. (Maybe you should write 'middle-aged' :)
I graduated from an Industry University over about ten years ago. Now I have a happy family. The only thing I regret thing is that I need a good job which can let me have a feeling of sucessness successfulness and for me to be (confirmed) accepted by the society.
Secondly, the reason why I came to here is because I hope I can to speak English flulently fluently. Frankly speaking (or Quite frankly,) , I'm not very satisfied with my oral English even if I have been learned learning English for such a long time. I hope I can improve on my English level further.
Can you help me? I'm expecting to talk with you. <--(Or 'I'll await the chance to have a conversation with you')
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