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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello, everyone. It's the first time for me to log in this netpage. Firstly, I'd like to make a simple instroduction of myself. I hope you can have a little understanding of me through this way. I'm a lady who is not too young and alao not too old. I graduated from an Industry University over ten years ago. Now I have a happy family. The only regret thing is I need a good job which can let me have a feeling of sucessness and to be confirmed by the socity. Secondly, the reason why I come to here is I hope I can speak English flulently. Frankly speaking, I'm not very satisfied with my oral English even if I have learned English for such a long time. I hope I can improve my English level further. Can you help me? I'm expecting to talk with you.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

 

Hello, everyone. It's the first time for me to log in onto this netpage. (or website) 

(or--"it's my first time logging onto this website")


Firstly, I'd like to make a simple instroduction of myself. I hope you can have a little understanding of me through this way (or from doing this).

I'm a lady who is not too young and alao also not too old. (Maybe you should write 'middle-aged' :)

I graduated from an Industry University over about ten years ago. Now I have a happy family. The only thing I regret thing is that I need a good job which can let me have a feeling of sucessness successfulness and for me to be (confirmed) accepted by the society.
Secondly, the reason why I came to here is because I hope I can to speak English flulently fluently. Frankly speaking (or Quite frankly,) , I'm not very satisfied with my oral English even if I have been learned learning English for such a long time. I hope I can improve on my English level further.
Can you help me? I'm expecting to talk with you. <--(Or 'I'll await the chance to have a conversation with you')

 

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You are doing great!!! :)
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