We Are Aliens
To all of the animals out there, we are kind of similar to aliens. Like how in the movies the aliens want to take over the planet by destroying the humanity and what not, there are quite the similarities going on about in there. When we need more space to fulfill our kinds a place to settle in, the animals were outcast away from their homes and force to search a new one instead brings about the whole nature of aliens that we frequently see in the movies not to mention the chopping of trees and the disrupting of the whole stabilized eco-system since the Ice Age in the process.
With heavy machinery and big photon cannon like saw coming down clearing the forest up from its natural origin until our needs have come true. And with all of that being done, a simple ‘sorry’ haven’t been given by us towards those runaway animals and also to the Mother Nature itself. True the world we live in now does have its share for animals to live in harmony and roam freely without us bothering it but was the past like this? It was way much better in the animal’s point of view and so hereby I say, "sorry dear animals".
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We Are Aliens
To all of the animals out there, we people are similar to aliens. (don't use "kind of" if writing formal essays)
Like how aliens in movies wanted to take over the planet by destroying the human race, you could see that there are similarities.
Because of our continuous use of the world for ourselves, animals are forced to go and search for new homes, which depicts us as an alien race we frequently see in movies instead of protectors of this world. The chopping of trees and the disruption of the whole stabilized ecosystem are getting worse as of today.
We use heavy machinery like saws for clearing vast forests just to meet our standards. Not even a simple "sorry" is given to those runaway animals and to Mother Nature itself.
It's true that the world we live in now should be shared with the animals to live in harmony; let them roam freely. For animals, the past is better than today, and so I am here to say, "Sorry, dear animals."
I love nature, too. I am inspired on your Notebook entry.. Keep up the good work and continue to write about our what really is going on in this world.. Save the world, save us all! :D
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Good writing and correction.
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