My favorite holiday!

My favorite holiday - 9 May Victory day. It is a very beatiful beautiful day.
It is early morning we are and I am with my family. We go the Eternal Fire (it is monument) There is are a lot of people; there are veterans and young children. And everbody comes here to honour the fallen. They are all very beatiful beautiful, some people in the form (I don't understand thechoice of word here)-a veterans and military man. On the streets playing music is playing and in the evening all the people gather to watch the salute on to the Square (is this better?)!

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It sounds like a very beautiful scene and like it was a very enjoyable time :) I just did not get the bit with 'some people in the form'; but otherwise, very good!