Just ramble
I was talking with my friends about how the mainstream brainwashes people to believe in the value of things like fashion, so the desire of possession can drive people to work their asses off to accomplish nothing but spur the marketing. Even we know it is a trap, we still fall into it. Because it is impossible to get out of the group consciousness, which established even when everyone wants to be special. Then we accidently saw the second part of TV series of Black Mirror. It really was the best fictional way to say this.
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Just ramble
I was talking with my friends about how the mainstream brainwashes people to believe in the value of things like fashion, so the desire of possession can drive people to work their asses off to accomplish nothing but to spur the marketing. Even though we know it is a trap, we still fall into it. Because it is impossible to get out of the group consciousness, which is established even when everyone wants to be special. Then we accidently saw the second part of a TV series of called Black Mirror. It really was the best fictional way to say this.
It may be better to say 'Then by chance we saw the second part...' instead of 'accidently' I find myself impressed with your ability! =o)
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You write English very well Sophie! I hope you do not mind that I make a few minor corrections?
(see corrections - just things to consider) =o)
Kind Regards,
CF
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