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The Strange Spring
Spring is coming! But the leaves fall on the ground instead of sprouting. It is more like autumn.The bare branches stretch into the blue sky which is clean and no cloudless. Looking up to the sky, I remember the words suddenly, "Roots are the branches in the sky and branches are the roots under ground." Everyone may play the complete opposite role in the real life.
It is strange spring that in Shenzhen China!
The sky is cloudless or the sky has no clouds. In each case, the subject is the sky. Keeping in mind the difference between what the sky is and what the sky has will help you to use the proper verbs.
The A strange spring
Spring comes is coming! But the leaves fall! on the ground instead of sprouting. It is more like autumn. The Bbare branches stretch into the blue sky, clear and cloudless which is clean and no cloud. Looking up at the sky, Ii remember these words suddenly, 'Roots are the branches in the sky and branches are the roots underground'.
Everyone may play their own inverse complete opposite role in the real life. It is a strange spring that this year in Sshenzhen China!
I think you want a poetic feel and so cut a few words to make it something you could shout aloud.
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