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Horrific experience Today is very hot.I have to open our air conditioner. Suddenly,I want to learn swiming.so I find out my swimsuit,swimming cap and swim glasses. We arrived the swimming pool before ten o'clock. I took two yuan to rent a life buoy because I cannot swim. I learnt swiming with life buoy.I found It's too hard.It seemed that stroke was very difficult to me.but I still wanted to do it. I took my life buoy off to learn stroke.unfortunately,I cannot do it and I was choked with water.Certainly,It terrified me.I felt I may lose my life because there's no familiar people at that time. Luckily,I was dragged out of water in the end. Anyhow,It's a horrific experience.even so,I'll go swiming if I have a chance.

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Horrific experience

Today is very hot.I have to open our air conditioner.

It's very hot today. I had to.

Suddenly,I want to learn swiming.so I find out my swimsuit,swimming cap and swim glasses.

I wanted to, found;

We arrived the swimming pool before ten o'clock.

Arrive can only be an intransitive verb, arrive at.

I took two yuan to rent a life buoy because I cannot swim.

I spend, it cost(ed) me

I cannot do it and I was choked with water.Certainly,It terrified me.I felt I may lose my life because there's no familiar people at that time.

I could not, I might have lost my life there were people...

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Just pick out some tense mistakes, though there're still some improprieties.

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