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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a student from Yangen University.I like making friends,and I have lots of friends.At my free time I likeing reading and chatting with my friends.

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Oh,YangEn University, this school is located in QuanZhou,under the province of FuJian.It is my hometown,and I am a student too. I study in HuBei.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a student from Yangen University. I like making friends, and I have lots of friends them. At In my free time I likeing reading and chatting with my friends.

 

It is helpful to your readers to also include the location (city or country) when you mention an institution (Yangen University) also be sure to put a space after punctuation. =o) 

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