First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,everyone!I'm new here,and I come from ShanDong province of China,my hometown is near Mountain Tai.I'm a college student now and I have dreamt to travel aroud the world since my childhood.Apparently that English now is prevalent in the world,I'll made my dream more easily if I can master English well.My English is not very good,I think a foreigner student can make me better.Oh,my god!These words had spent me almost 20 minutes,maybe you can get what levl of my English is on.It's my first essay,thank you very much for examine my work.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone! I'm new here, and I come from ShanDong province in China. My hometown is near Mountain Tai. I'm a college student now and I have dreamt of travelling around the world since my childhood. Apparently that English now is prevalent in the world. It would make my dream more easier if I couldmaster English well.My English is not very good. I think a foreigner student can make me better. Oh,my god! These words took had spent me almost 20 minutes to write, maybe you can guess what level of my English is at. It's my first essay. Thank you very much for correcting my work.
Not bad. You must leave a space after punctuation.
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Its ok it took me forever to type a couple of sentences in Chinese. I will help you buddy I hope you can help me to.
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