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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi!!!!!
I'm Ana, an Argentinian girl Argentinian, who wants to learn English!!
I've got am 20 years old.
I study English only at school.

(I only study English at school)
I wanna learn more, and I need your help for that. And also, I can make good friends =)

Good Luck!!

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That's very good!! (:

But remember, in English, adjectives come first. (i.e. red dog not dog red/perro rojo)

In English, we say I am __ years old. (i.e. I am 20 years old not I have 20 years [old]/Yo tengo 20 años.)

Keep up the good work(:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi!!!!!
I'm Ana, a girl from Argentina (or an Argentinian girl), who wants learn English!!
I am 20 years old.
I study English only at the school.
I wanna learn more, and I need your help for that. And also, I can make good friends =)

Good Luck!!