I got up in the early morning. (You need to use space between words and sentences.)

 (Sentence must start with Capital letter) When I finished all the routine things in the morning, (Same is here.)

 Then I went to work by underground/ subway. (The word tube is incorrect.) (Same is here)

The subway is so crowed even I (change the order of words “I even”) elbowed forward.  

 After about 1 hour, (Space) I reach my office. (Space)  Most (OF) staff had arrived at the office except few colleagues. (Space)

 When all staff were present (Space) we had a short time meeting about when and how to deliver and receive products. (Space)

This week (Space) we received new equipments and spare (Space) parts from London.(Space)

 We still have extra days to deal with them before charged. (Space)

We also had other products in the subcontractor's factory waiting for ( “that need to be” ) delivered. (Space)

All these things really made me screw up...what a( that was a ) busy work day for me!

Keep practicing :)