First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Chen Ling. I am from Sichuan China. I am twenty-four years old. Now I am in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is a very beautiful city and many people came here to work, so I also work here.
My English isn't very good. Writing it on the keyboard is also slow, so I will learn English very hard. But my Chinese is very good because I am a Chinese person.
I hope I can make some friends here and we can learn from each other.

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First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

My name is Chen Ling. I am from Sichuan, China. I am 24 twenty-four years old. Now I am in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is a very beautiful city, and many people came come here to work. So I also work here.
My English isn't very good. Write Writing it in key is also slowly slow. So I will learn study English very hard. But my Chinese is very quite good, because I am a Chinese person.
I hope I can make some friends here and we can learn from each other.