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Teaching children to be good members of society is never a business as simple as we think to be.The standard to judge whether children can be good members of society or not is not only from what skills and knowladge they have but also what abilities and ethics they keep.So how to teach children to be good members has become a concerned topic among the whole society.
Some people believe that parents play important roles on teaching their children.It is obvious that parents’ behavior has a deep influence on their children’s growth.Parents who are excellent people can set fine examples for children and make their children grow up just like what they are.On the contrary,parents who are bad behaviored can have negetive influence on the lives of their children and make them be abandoned by society finally.
However,children’s growth is not up to their parents only.It also can be effected by a larger circle such as school,community even the whole society.School is especially significant for it is the first step for children if they want to be socially reintegrated.When children are at school,they can’t aviod the effection from their friends,classmates or teachers.School is a place where children can be educated.Teaching every student to be a moral person is much more important than just teaching knowledge.That’s why there are still a large group of people consider that school education should hold more responsibility.
Generally speaking,children will be influenced by both their parents and their schools.It will not work if we just consider either of them seriously.Further more,children’s lives can’t be always occupied by parents and schools.They will step into society at last.On this point,to cultivate children become good members of society,there are much more responsibilities should be undertaken by the whole society.
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