About my daughter

My daughter is just 2 years old. She is really cute and smart. She was born in 2010, and so now she has grown up a little. The first time I saw her was when she was brought out by the nurse; she looked so quiet and clean inside the arms of the nurse. Her eyebrowsand her nose looked just like mine. My heart was caught by her at that moment. (It would be more natural to say "She took my heart at that moment," but the way you said it is fine)
When she was a little bit older, her mother took a lot of photos of her. She was (was or is? Did she stop being a good photographer?) really a good photographer. I use these photos as the wall paper of my laptop computer. One day, I had to make a presentation to some government officers. The head of these officers was a rigorous man. He was always saying bad things like: "This is wrong, I don't like it," or "that's not suitable for this city", so I was a little nervous that day. When it's it was my turn to report, I plugged in the connecter, and the projector showed the image from my laptop computer. there came out laughers Laughter came from my audience, I was surprised, and suddenly I realized that it was my daughter's image, the wallpaper of my computer. I was embarrassed and said, " Sorry, that's my daughter." I said. But This time, however, the head officer smiled to at me and told me," She is very cute! Her age must be the same as my grand-daughter." Those words comforted me, so I started the presentation, and that day our design got approved.
It was a surprising way that my daughter helped me about with my business. But but I should say "thank you" to thank her. People hold the same passion no matter who they are or how much money they have, but love is always the same.

Great job! This is a great story. A similar thing happened to me in one of my classes when my professor plugged in his laptop and a picture of his daughter came up as his background.

Be very careful about comma use. You don't want to have any comma splices, which is when you connect two sentences with a comma instead of using a period.