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Please help me correct this Japanese~ (crazy wrong!) I'm doing an assignment where i'm supposed to introduce my family a bit and compare our heights to each other.. but I haven't studied Japanese in several years, so I've forgotten so so so much... As a result, my grammar is in absolute Shambles, and Chaos. Please help me correct this... (It does NOT have to be written "fluently" with a lot of advanced words and grammar! Just basic things that I can understand, so I see where I went wrong~) 私の母は私一緒にSödra Sandbyに住んでしかし父はLundに住んでいます。母は女医と女性政治家で父は引退します。 私はお姉さんは四人がいってお兄さんは三人がいます。一番背が高いのお姉さんはKristinaです。 25歳で182cm高いです。一番背が高いのお兄さんはJohanです。188cmぐらいです。そうしてお兄さんはお姉さんより背が高いで私もより背が高いです。しかし私は母より背が高いです! It's Supposed to say "My mother lives with me in Södra Sandby, but my father lives in Lund. My mother is a doctor and a politician, and my father is retired. I have four older sisters and three older brothers. My tallest sister is Kristina. She's 25 years old and 182cm tall. My tallest brother is Johan. He's about 188cm tall. So my brother is taller than my sister, and taller than me too. But I'm taller than my mother!" Something like that, lol~ ^^;;;

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私の母は私と一緒にSödra Sandbyに住んでいるけど、しかし父はLundに住んでいます。母は女医と女性政治家で父は引退しています。 

私にはお姉さんはが四人がいってお兄さんは三人がいます。一番背が高いのお姉さんはKristinaです。 25歳で182cm高いです。一番背が高いのお兄さんはJohanです。188cmぐらいです。そうしてお兄さんはお姉さんより背が高いでし、私もよりも背が高いです。しかし私は母より背が高いです!

 

 

こんなかんじでしょうか、いい紹介ができるといいですね:)

 

 

 

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Please help me correct this Japanese~ (crazy wrong!)

I'm doing an assignment where i'm supposed to introduce my family a bit and compare our heights to each other.. but I haven't studied Japanese in several years, so I've forgotten so so so much... As a result, my grammar is in absolute Shambles, and Chaos. Please help me correct this...
(It does NOT have to be written "fluently" with a lot of advanced words and grammar! Just basic things that I can understand, so I see where I went wrong~)

私の母は私とSödra Sandbyに住んでいます。しかし父はLundに住んでいます。母は女医と女性政治家で、父は定年退職しました。
私には4人のお姉さんと3人のお兄さんがいます。一番背が高いお姉さんはKristinaです。 25歳で182cmも身長があります。一番背が高いお兄さんはJohanです。188cmぐらいです。だから、お兄さんはお姉さんより背が高くて、私よりも背が高いことになります。しかし、私は母より背が高いです!

It's Supposed to say
"My mother lives with me in Södra Sandby, but my father lives in Lund. My mother is a doctor and a politician, and my father is retired.
I have four older sisters and three older brothers. My tallest sister is Kristina. She's 25 years old and 182cm tall. My tallest brother is Johan. He's about 188cm tall. So my brother is taller than my sister, and taller than me too. But I'm taller than my mother!"

Something like that, lol~ ^^;;;

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