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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Ok, This is me. A person who do not know lots of English words but like to to someone who could speak or write in English. Weird!! Isn't it? ha... mmm... let's get start it. My name is Pearl. I am old. Mmmm... I not mean I am very old but I actully older than others. So you could guess how old am I. I do not mind. ha.... Actually, I am kind of wondering does someone will write to me?? Peolple will see me article and really write to me?? Ha!! Mabye I should just write and see what will happen? Last night, I rented a DVD maned "Hachiko". I have to said that "I am really getting old and my heart becomes really tender" Because of "I was crying ".Unbelievable, I do not cry when I saw this kind of movies when I was youn. but now, I did. When I saw "Hachiko seats outside of the train stuation and wait for its hoster "Pocker". For Hachiko, he does not know happen, he could not understand why Richard does not come out the door of the train stuation and talk to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". But he wait there day by day, years by years at the same time, no matter rain or snow. For Hach, life is so simple, "you get the promise, and you keep it." For this, he wait. Nine year's waiting, until he die. Surely, we could not really kown does Pocker come to Hachi or not. But, I think I like the director to display the ending way at the movie. When the end of life, Hachi finally saw Pocker come out the door and said to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". This is not a sad ending but it is a really touching ending for me. I like animals very much but I do not have any pets like doy or cat becuase "life is a very heavy duty". Being responsible person, I am wondering hold the job well. Hoping, people who have any pets could take good car to them and also take good car to their family and friends. mmm... I am going to serious... maybe just go another TV show "Angel" and get some relaxing. Relaxing from a scaring show? Weird person, right? ha.... But it works for me. becasue I always look very careful and closed to the make-up technique and evaluate it. ha.... I maybe could talk about this next time.?

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Tai wan has a similar climates with our city.I know little about Tai wan.There are many landscape and fruite.




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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Ok, this is me. A person who does not know lots many of English words but who would like to talk to someone who could can speak or and write in English. Weird!! Isn't it? ha...
mmm... let's get start it started.

My name is Pearl. I am old. Mmmm... I do not mean that I am very old but I actully am older than others. So you could can guess how old am I I am. I do not mind. ha.... Actually, I am kind of wondering does wil someone will write to me?? People will see my article and really write to me?? Ha!! Mabye I should just write and see what will happen?

Last night, I rented a DVD maned called "Hachiko". I have to said say that I am really getting old and my heart is becoming really tender because of I was crying .Unbelievable, I do did not cry when I saw this these kind of movies when I was young but now, I do.

When I saw Hachiko seats sits outside of the train stuation station and waits for its hoster(?) "Pocker". For Hachiko, he does not know what has happened, he could not understand why Richard does not come out the door of the train stuation station and talk to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". But he waits there day by day, year by after year at the same time, no matter if there is rain or snow.

For Hach, life is so simple, "you get the promise, and you keep it." For this, he waits. Nine years waiting, until he dies. Surely, we could not really kown does if Pocker does come to Hachi or not. But, I think I would have liked the director to display the ending way at in the movie. When the end of life his life ends, Hachi finally saw sees Pocker coming out the door and says to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". This is not a sad ending but it is a really touching ending for me.

I like animals very much but I do not have any pets like a dog or a cat becuase life is a very heavy duty. Being a responsible person, I am wondering if I could have a pet hold the job well. Hoping I hope that people who have any pets could take good care to of them and also take good care to of their family and friends.

mmm... I am going to get serious... maybe just go watch another TV show "Angel" and get some relaxing rest. Relaxing from a scaring scary show? Weird person, right? ha.... But it works for me, becasue I always look very careful and closed to the make-up technique and evaluate it. ha.... Maybe I could talk about this next time.?


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Excellent entry you wrote there. Not too many horrible mistakes for a long entry like this, although I just did not understand one part, which I put a (?) beside. Otherwise, very well written, and keep up the fantastic work!



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First notebook entry: Introducing myself- amended.


 

Ok, this is me. A person who does not know many English words but who would like to talk to someone who can speak and write in English. Weird!! Isn't it? ha...
mmm... let's get started.

My name is Pearl. I am old. Mmmm... I do not mean that I am very old but I am older than others. So you can guess how old Iam. I do not mind. ha.... Actually, I am kind of wondering will someone write to me?? People will see my article and really write to me?? Ha!! Maybe I should just write and see what will happen?

Last night, I rented a DVD called "Hachiko". I have to say that I am really getting old and my heart is becoming really tender because I was crying .Unbelievable, I did not cry when I saw these kind of movies when I was young but now, I do.

When I saw Hachiko sits outside of the train station and waits for its owner "Pocker". For Hachiko, he does not know what has happened, he could not understand why Richard does not come out the door of the train station and talk to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". But he waits there day by day, year after year, no matter if there is rain or snow.

For Hach, life is so simple, "you get the promise, and you keep it." For this, he waits. Nine years waiting, until he dies. Surely, we could not really kown if Pocker does come to Hachi or not. But, I think I would have liked the director to display the ending in the movie. When his life ends, Hachi finally sees Pocker coming out the door and says to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". This is not a sad ending but it is a really touching ending for me.

I like animals very much but I do not have any pets like a dog or a cat becuase life is a very heavy duty. Being a responsible person, I am wondering if I could have a pet. I hope that people who have any pets take good care of them and also take good care of their family and friends.

mmm... I am going to get serious... maybe just go watch another TV show "Angel" and get some rest. Relaxing from a scary show? Weird person, right? ha.... But it works for me, becasue I always look very careful and closed to the make-up technique and evaluate it. ha.... Maybe I could talk about this next time?





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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Ok, This is me. A person who do not know lots of English words but like to to someone who could speak or write in English. Weird!! Isn't it? ha...
mmm... let's get start it.

My name is Pearl. I am old. Mmmm... I not mean I am very old but I actully older than others. So you could guess how old am I. I do not mind. ha.... Actually, I am kind of wondering does someone will write to me?? Peolple will see me article and really write to me?? Ha!! Mabye I should just write and see what will happen?

Last night, I rented a DVD maned "Hachiko". I have to said that "I am really getting old and my heart becomes really tender" Because of "I was crying ".Unbelievable, I do not cry when I saw this kind of movies when I was young. but now, I did.

When I saw "Hachiko seats outside of the train stuation and wait for its hoster "Pocker". For Hachiko, he does not know happen, he could not understand why Richard does not come out the door of the train stuation and talk to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". But he wait there day by day, years by years at the same time, no matter rain or snow.

For Hach, life is so simple, "you get the promise, and you keep it." For this, he wait. Nine year's waiting, until he die. Surely, we could not really kown does Pocker come to Hachi or not. But, I think I like the director to display the ending way at the movie. When the end of life, Hachi finally saw Pocker come out the door and said to him "Hach, come on, good boy, let's go home". This is not a sad ending but it is a really touching ending for me.

I like animals very much but I do not have any pets like doy or cat becuase "life is a very heavy duty". Being responsible person, I am wondering hold the job well. Hoping, people who have any pets could take good car to them and also take good car to their family and friends.

mmm... I am going to serious... maybe just go another TV show "Angel" and get some relaxing. Relaxing from a scaring show? Weird person, right? ha.... But it works for me. becasue I always look very careful and closed to the make-up technique and evaluate it. ha.... I maybe could talk about this next time.?





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