我语法是弱
我是学习汉语在大学。我需要学习更多的语法。我语法是致命伤。我需要学习更多词汇变得更流畅。
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我语法是弱(我语法弱）（我语法薄弱）
我是学习汉语在大学（我在大学是学习汉语的）。我需要学习更多的语法。我语法是致命伤。我需要学习更多词汇变得更流畅。
The order of English sentences are quite different from Chinese, that is why you have difficulties in learning Chinese. The problem is that you write Chinese but use the order of English sentences.
you wrote: 我是学习汉语在大学。 In this sentence "学习汉语“ stands for " do sth", "在大学” stands for " at sw。" the order of English is " sb. do sth. at sw." but Chinese is " sb. at sw. do sth."
so we often said: 我在大学是学习汉语(专业）的。
Don't worry, more writing and do more exercise, you will improve a lot. Just go for it.
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我语法是弱
我是学习汉语在大学。我需要学习更多的语法。我语法是致命伤。我需要学习更多词汇变得更流畅。
我在大学学习汉语，我需要学习更多的语法。我的语法是致命伤，我需要学习更多词汇(让我的口语）变得更流畅。
语法需要多练习。
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Yea, I agree with Fiona. You're problem is that you don't have a good enough feel for the language yet, so you're still literally translating English to Chinese as if they were both the same. So reading your sentences I know immediately what you were trying to say by what you were thinking in English as you typed. Also I know by what vocab you are using that you are reaching a bit over your head to try and use some things that you don't know. But that's not necessarily a bad thing. Experience is, after all, the best teacher. I think if you find some people to talk to on a regular basis that should help you improve. And by talk to I mean at least like on QQ if not on some video chat platform. (which QQ happens to possess as well) Other than that, I'm not trying to be a downer, rather I will say that it is good that oyu are experimenting and that you recognize your problem. Now you have to identify and pursue use of a really good method by which to rectify your grammatically and vernacularly deficient situation. 加油！ :)
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不用太在意修改的，我都看的明白你那句话的意思，我们讲话也没有什么语法可以遵循，听得懂，听得明白就好
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我语法很弱
我在大学里学习汉语专业。我需要学习更多的语法。我语法是致命伤。我需要学习更多词汇变得更流畅。
汉语的语法说难也难 不难也不难 一句话的意思可以有好多种说法。多跟别人说说话 就知道了
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