Write about school -my translation (Chinese->English) i think it's not coherent

從小我就是一個很注重穿著打扮與形象的人，只要岀門都一定會打扮，即使只是去倒垃圾。
在台灣的國中生都要穿著制服，而我們學校有一項規定，只要秩序良好的班級，一星期就可以穿一天便服上學，對我來說，能穿便服是個大日子，我會用心搭配衣櫃裡現有的衣服，只為了得到同濟的讚許，上學的途中就像model走秀一樣，希望吸引他人的目光，甚至不惜打扮得古怪新潮。


I'm the type of person who pays attention to dressing and image. I [like to] dress up every time I go out, even when I put the garbage out.

High school students in Taiwan must wear uniforms but our school has a provision that if our class is very orderly [well behaved], we are permitted to wear civilian [ordinary] clothes to school one day a week.

It's a great day when I can wear my ordinary clothes. I try to match [show off] my clothes with the intention of receiving praise [compliments] from my classmates. On the way to school is just like walking on the catwalk. 

I want to attract the attention of others, even if I dress oddly.