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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i'm a college student and english is my major. i just want to seize every opportunity to highten myself both inside and outside. make every day count is my short-turn goal.

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I'm a college student, and English is my major.

I just want to seize every opportunity to improve myself, both inside and outside.

To make every day count is my short-term goal.

 

 

The first letter of each sentence should be a capital letter. Commas should be placed where you might normally have a pause in your speech (there is more to it than that, but it's an easy way to remember).

 

Heighten usually refers to physical height, such as how tall someone is. I am guessing that you want to improve yourself, instead of heighten yourself.

 

I hope that helps!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i'm(I'm) a college student and english is my major. i(I) just want to seize every opportunity to highten myself both inside and outside(out). make(Making) every day count is my short-turn(term) goal.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a college student and english is my major. I just want to seize every opportunity to improve myself both inside and outside. Making every day count is my short-turn goal.

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Yeah.. That's a great news. We should all go for the win! :)
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haha thanks a lot~ Indeed. actually, i can't speak English that fluently,but i believe i'm getting better. haha :-)

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