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on this night When I saw out of window just now, many golden decorations was hanging from the tree in two sides of street. so quiet and so beautiful. Eventually,I finsh my study scheme.It's time to go to bed now,but I go on writing some stuff yet. There is one thing make me happy.looking at my puppy, I can know some close feelings between us and think when to take a shower for him,haha~ He don't like it. Otherwise, studying let me grow. I always enjoy the study of process.whatever I do ,the process is more important than the result all the time.I hope I can share with my thought to all of my friends.Sharing is a happy thing too.

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On In This Night (Tonight)

When I saw out of window just now, many golden decorations was were hanging from the trees in two both sides of the street, so quiet and so beautiful. 

Eventually, Now, I have finished finsh with my study scheme. It's time for me to go to bed now, but I would go on writing some stuff yet. 

There is one thing that makes me always happy, i.e. looking at my puppy. I can know always feel some close feelings anonymous yet close relation with it (him)  between us and I am just thinking when to take a shower for him. Haha! He don't doesn't like it at all. 

Otherwise, Studying let helps me to grow as a person. I always enjoy the process of studying of process. Whatever I do, I think that the process of doing something is always more important than the result itself all the time. I hope I can share with my thoughts to with all of my friends. Sharing is a happy thing too.

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It should be "on both sides of the street, " the thing that I should have corrected.

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