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my past little world
I haven't draw a picture for a long time.This morining I found a picture drawn last year . Suddenly,I remembered what I said ,when I was young, I told to my mother I wanted to be a painter.haha. So I began to have my first lesson. It's indeed one of my hobbies and desire.This is a pleasant thing for me,because I always feel cheerful and quiet as I paint. I do feel like the paper without any color, painted any color I want.
I think I will continue painting .I have a idea about it. Do the things you like, then you can find a life you want. Life is an adventure.!!!
--- I can see that you really love drawing. ^^
my past little world
I haven't draw a picture for a long time.This morining I found a picture writen last year . Suddenly,I remrember what I said ,when I was young, I said to my mother I wanted to be a painter.haha.So I began to have my first lesson. it's indeed one of my hobbies and desire.This is a pleasant thing for me,because I always feel cheerful and quiet as I paint.I do feel like the paper without any color , painted any color I want.
I think I will continue painting .I have a idea about it. Do the things you like , then you can find a life you want. Life is an adventure.!!!
"I haven't drawn a picture in a long time. (switch the word "for" with the word "in" and conjugate draw into the past tense "drawn" to set the sentence into past tense). This morning, I found a picture that was drawn last year. (Morning was misspelled. Also, change the word "written" to draw, and put it in the past tense. Except in this case, add the word "was" and make it "was drawn", to make it agree with the past tense. [Subject-verb agreement].) Suddenly, I remembered that when I was young, I said to my mother, "I want to be a painter". (Reorder the sentence like this to make it grammatically correct. Also, when quoting something someone has said...use "" marks.) So, I started taking my first lesson. It is one of my hobbies and desires. This is a plesant thing for me because, I will always feel cheerful and quiet whenever I paint. I feel like without any color on the paper, I am able to paint it whatever color I want.
I think I will continue painting. I have an idea about this: "Do the things you like, and then you can find the life you want." Life is an adventure! (Started taking your first lesson- keeps the paragraph in the past tense. Switch the last sentence's words around to make it correct grammatically, and to provide a clear definition or what you're trying to say. Use "" marks around your idea. That way it becomes a quote. Use a colon to seperate thoughts, etc.
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