Introduction paragraph: Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled...
Introduction paragraph: "Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public"
I think that is not correct censor or controll the Interent’s material because I belive in the free expression and I think that the correct form to protect the public is teach them the correct use of Internet.
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Introduction paragraph: Material on the internet should be censored or controlled...
Introduction paragraph: "Material on the internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public"
I think that it is not correct to censor or control the interent’s material, because I belive in the free expression. and I think that the correct form to protect the public is to teach them the correct use of internet.
The letter "i" in "internet" doesn't need to capitalized. I split one of your sentences in two in order to flow better.
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