First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm not good at lengthening my compliment, but some cliche may make up for it, which is I like English.

I hope I can communicate with the worldwide people and the English culture is so abundant that I want to learn it step by step. Thus first of all, I have to possess a proficient ability of English.

What's more, traveling around the world is always my dream! I would like to share my opinions and hobbies with the people I met. I wish the guy could be you,my hard-working writing teacher~~~~

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I'm not good at lengthy compliments, so although it is a cliche, I will simply say - I like English.

I hope I can communicate with people worldwide as the English culture is so prevalent. I want to learn it step by step, but first of all, I have to possess proficiency in English.

Travelling around the world has always been my dream! I would like to share my opinions and interests with the people I meet. I hope that this person could be you, my hard-working writing teacher.

You are an enigma. You speak Mandarin, you want to learn English and you are studying in France.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm not good at stretching out any compliment, but some cliche may make up for it, which is why I like English. (I hope I understood  that correctly?)

I hope to communicate with the people worldwide, and the English language is so abundant that I want to learn it step by step. Thus first of all, I need to attain a proficient ability in English. 

English culture is how people live in England. :)

What's more, travelling around the world has always been my dream! I would like to share my opinions and hobbies with the people I meet. I wish that could be you, my hard-working writing teacher~~~~

Nice! Welcome to italki. :)