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It's very good. Pay attention to vocabulary; I would not use the word "cherish" to discribe a job opportunity unless it were the best dream job in the world or president of the USA. "courses include it indeed, however" you structured this a little awkwardly, can you fix it? Your letter stresses how you feel about the job which is important but as a boss I would be very interested in what you could bring to the company regarding skills, capabilities and competence which you touched on well. What would make you a successful candidate for any position. Those are the only things I can say which are points to consider correcting; the letter is very good. Good luck! My Skype: brian.madden4
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