First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a 13-year-old Chinese girl and I want to go to London. That is It's why I come here to study English. Going to London is my dream, because I love the buildings there(they are beautiful ,aren't them they?) and I want to see a different culture. I think people in England are very friendly and polite politely ,too.
But the first thing I have to learn is English. My English is not good, so I want to find a teacher to teach me. I think, if I work hard, I will go to London with my friend as I want. Can you help me? Thank you very much!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a 13 years old Chinese girl,and I want to go to London.
It's why I come here to study English .Going to London is my dream ,because I love the buildings there(they are beautiful ,aren't they?),and I want to see a different culture.I think people in England are very friendly and polite ,too.
But the first thing I have to learn is English.My English is not good,so I want to find a teacher to teach me,I think if I work hard ,I will go to London with my friend as I want.Can you help me? Thank you very much!