First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am working in a metro city . i I have completed my B. Com. in Hindi medium & i m and I am facing much many difficulties in communication to with my seniors. For this reason,  i my required I need to learn english.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am working in Metro City. I completed my B com in Hindi medium and I am facing much difficulties in communication for senior. For this reason I am required to learn English.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm working in metro city . I completed my B com in Hindi medium & I'm facing many difficulties in communication to my senior; for this reason I am required to learn english.

I added appostrophes (') between I and m, because that is a contraction.

I capitalised the word I in the middle of sentences, because I is always capitalised (even when in contractions)

I changed 'much difficulties' to 'many difficulties', because difficulties is a countable noun.

I added a semicolon between 'senior' and 'for' to seperate the two related sentences. 

I changed 'I my' to 'I am' because the word 'my' did not fit there.